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Storm's Savage Land Rescue Mission - 01 by BobKO Storm's Savage Land Rescue Mission - 01 by BobKO
After being abducted to the Savage Land by Sauron ([link] and [link]) and a few failed escape attempts later ([link]) this story picks up a few days after Sauron recaptured Storm ([link]) and the last story left off.

Sauron has finally managed to hypnotise Storm to unleash all her mutant energy upon the savage land so he can drain her energy and remain Sauron. Meanwhile the other X-men are on their way to rescue their abducted team mate. But she is far from her usual self..

STORY: The story was adopted by these clips from the X-Men Animated Series: [link] and [link]

SUPPORT: I'm experimenting with the DA Premium platform. I spent a good amount of money getting these commissions done. If you like to support the commissions I order and want the images in their full resolution (300DPI / 33005100) purchase it here on the right side.

DISCLAIMER: This image was created by the very talented mhunt ([link]) and is part of a 5 page commission he did for me. Go pay him some love in his own gallery here: [link]
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The way you draw people is very realistic, with good shading, facial expressions, and body positions. However, the action shots feel like they are missing the action. The impression is more of the characters interrupting their fight to pose for you, instead of the feeling that should come across of a photograph of the action as it happens. Perhaps you could help remedy this by pausing a video right in the middle of the action and using that as a reference, or to compare it to your work? Not to say that your artwork is bad. There is no way I could draw as well as you :) However, the lack of action is what stood out most.
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dabomb29 Featured By Owner Edited Jul 7, 2015
The gas knocked her out.
BobKO Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2015
sure did :)
CuriaDD Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
omg what a trap, she had no clue...
BobKO Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
It's for her own good ;)
andrewr255 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
"Sauron," how dare he use my name!! ;)

Another great comic page by panel master Mhunt.
BobKO Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
Glad to hear that you like it. I spent a good amount of time perfecting the panels and mhunt did an amazing job getting these pages done. More coming. stay tuned!
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